这算是我的毕业论文吧！应该没有大错误。

   Last night we have finished our business oral English class.looking back now,I have  studied  for about two months, it is not until the class is over that I  was finally permitted to enter the class the first time .at that time ,I just know that my teacher is a woman who have a pretty standard pronounciation and a good looking.In fact ,my initial intention to attend the online class is that I want to know something about online education.having attened so many classes in the group,I find the atmosphere in the class is more active than my traditional classes.people who attend the class have specific goals for their participation.so we can get more in class.besides,the teacher is very kind hearted in solving our problems.I can ask her puzzles any time .besides ,I can watch the video though I didn’t at6tend the class in the past.it is very convenient for me.but,every coin has two sides.since we can only commuciate on the internet,therefore ,it is hard for the teacher to know whether students had mastered the knowledge.maybe in the near future,the problem can be solved,but,I think it is useless since we are adults ,and we can manage ourself independently.

All the above is nonsense.you can neglect them.in my English class,thinking in English logical is a new way for me to remember words.it is useful for both the new words and review the words we have learned in the past. It kills two birds with one stone(I don’t know whether the sentence is correct).the following are my suggestions:in my view,the contents in our class is not as  abundant as I imagined in my mind.it is probably because our class emphasize much on oral English expression..

  In balance,I have improved a lot in the past two months with the aid of my teacher.I will work hard all the way.